
Tuesday, December 29, 2009
Once Was Smooth: part 2

come to me
let us
leave behind
all barbs
pointy
skin-piercing
blood-trickling
sharp pieces
especially
the ones
I make myself
new year,
come to me
a smooth wire
rests in a coil
waiting to be stretched taught
those white barbs?
God laced them
because what
once was smooth
didn't grow me
I lean against His chest
exhale my breath
and smudge my finger along
new year,
I am ready
come to me
My above poem was written in response to L.L. Barkat's Seedlings in Stone writing prompt:
If you like, join in with our "Beginnings" writing project too. You can either write a vignette about "beginnings" or try out the HighCallingBlogs poetry writing prompt: Choose a New Year word like “resolve”, “resolution”, “dream” or one you think up and begin, middle, or end a poem with it.
My free-verse High Calling Blog prompt is it for now.
* photos: all surfaces were smooth before the ice crystals formed and clung in such beauty; visit here for more God-breathed photos and another poem at Once Was Smooth: part 1
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5 comments:
incredible.
piercing beauty
I LOVE these photos. Oh, so amazing.
Oh! So amazing, these words with these photos. Breathtaking, really.
Happy Beginnings.
beautiful words, beautiful pictures. Love this.
More wow!
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