Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Once Was Smooth: part 2











new year
come to me

let us
leave behind
all barbs

pointy
skin-piercing
blood-trickling
sharp pieces

especially
the ones
I make myself

new year,
come to me


a smooth wire
rests in a coil
waiting to be stretched taught


those white barbs?

God laced them
because what
once was smooth
didn't grow me

I lean against His chest
exhale my breath
and smudge my finger along

new year,
I am ready
come to me



My above poem was written in response to L.L. Barkat's Seedlings in Stone writing prompt:
If you like, join in with our "Beginnings" writing project too. You can either write a vignette about "beginnings" or try out the HighCallingBlogs poetry writing prompt: Choose a New Year word like “resolve”, “resolution”, “dream” or one you think up and begin, middle, or end a poem with it.

My free-verse High Calling Blog prompt is it for now.

* photos: all surfaces were smooth before the ice crystals formed and clung in such beauty; visit here for more God-breathed photos and another poem at Once Was Smooth: part 1




5 comments:

deb said...

incredible.
piercing beauty

L.L. Barkat said...

I LOVE these photos. Oh, so amazing.

Laura said...

Oh! So amazing, these words with these photos. Breathtaking, really.

Happy Beginnings.

togetherforgood said...

beautiful words, beautiful pictures. Love this.

Ann Kroeker said...

More wow!

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